Sunday, February 21, 2010


thicker than rain-drops on November thorn,
fleshy tongue meets pink petal.
roundabout rose gardens 'round here
remind us to yield with
absent umbrellas
step lightly over the well-tended grass.
ensconced in the long-abandoned
rotten wood will conceal our stolen
kiss while the circus
passes by


Friar Tuck said...

very skilled work

Jade said...

2 years ago I was living on SE Taylor and 24th and working on 12th and Powell. I walked through the addition and by your old house everyday!!

ani rose said...

mm pretty about my home town... thanks

suesun said...

friar- sincere gratitude for your compliment
jade- oh.....that house..... yes....
ani-you're welcome

Anonymous said...

fleshy tongue meets pink petal - love that line